Sunday, August 11, 2019

The Sea Is Me Comments

Rating: 4.7

I glance across the moon lit beach,
The grains of sand squelch under feet,
Impossibilities, become real
But all that's real is out of reach.
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Sarah Persson
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John Abel 14 December 2024

Nice

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Sarah Persson 17 September 2019

Thank you again to all for the wonderful comment and support. They all mean so much

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2019

CONGRATULATIONS! A lovely poem is chosen as the poem of the day. Life is so deep to feel like sea. Yes, you are the sea. This is an interesting poem beautifully penned.

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Congrats! Sarah Louise Persson, The self and the sea blends in well...

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Lyn Paul 16 September 2019

The sea is that place filled will answers to every question. Wonderful to read.

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Aqua Flower 16 September 2019

Wonderful poem of the day! Alive with much beautiful imagery about life! Congratulations! !

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Bernard Snyder 16 September 2019

Very good poem, Sarah. I like it a lot! Keep doing your thing.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 16 September 2019

A touching, imaginative poem about the inner turmoil and the eternal search for peace! Congratulations!

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Fabrice Fedeli 16 September 2019

Great work by a great poet

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Brian Stafford 16 September 2019

A most enjoyable read, congrats on getting poem of the day! well done!

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 September 2019

Each wave that crashes, pounds the sand, The rhythm writhes inside, I find That with each breath, each heart felt beat, My turmoil sounds and it repeats. inner peace. the soft waves that beat inside and our peaceful longings. The sea is me and I've become.....so touching.. very nice poem. congrats for POD. Tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2019

I close my eyes and all I hear, Is thunder from my inner ear, A beating heart, my rhythmic drum, The sea is me and I've become.....so touching and impressive. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the member poem of POD.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 16 September 2019

" A beating heart, my rhythmic drum The sea is me, and I have become." Superb conceptualization. Congrats on poem of the Day. and I have become."

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Ratnakar Mandlik 16 September 2019

" A beating heart, my rhythmic drum The sea is me, and I have become."

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alex sarich 16 September 2019

nice poem.i often find myself there sometimes in a different place.

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James Mclain 16 September 2019

Many of my poem's have the sea as subject material as well. Congratulations on having this poem chosen as poem of the day. James

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 September 2019

'I close my eyes and all I hear, Is thunder from my inner ear, A beating heart, my rhythmic drum, The sea is me and I've become. '... is a beautiful stanza. Very nice poem indeed. Congrats.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 September 2019

Is out of reach! ! Only to accept the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 September 2019

Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!

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Bharati Nayak 16 September 2019

I close my eyes and all I hear, Is thunder from my inner ear, A beating heart, my rhythmic drum, The sea is me and I've become. - - - - - - -Our feelings are like a vast sea - - Million waves - - that rise and fall.But go deep, you will find a peaceful sea.Congratulations for the beautiful Poem of the Day.

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