I glance across the moon lit beach,
The grains of sand squelch under feet,
Impossibilities, become real
But all that's real is out of reach.
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Thank you again to all for the wonderful comment and support. They all mean so much
CONGRATULATIONS! A lovely poem is chosen as the poem of the day. Life is so deep to feel like sea. Yes, you are the sea. This is an interesting poem beautifully penned.
Congrats! Sarah Louise Persson, The self and the sea blends in well...
The sea is that place filled will answers to every question. Wonderful to read.
Wonderful poem of the day! Alive with much beautiful imagery about life! Congratulations! !
Very good poem, Sarah. I like it a lot! Keep doing your thing.
A touching, imaginative poem about the inner turmoil and the eternal search for peace! Congratulations!
A most enjoyable read, congrats on getting poem of the day! well done!
Each wave that crashes, pounds the sand, The rhythm writhes inside, I find That with each breath, each heart felt beat, My turmoil sounds and it repeats. inner peace. the soft waves that beat inside and our peaceful longings. The sea is me and I've become.....so touching.. very nice poem. congrats for POD. Tony
I close my eyes and all I hear, Is thunder from my inner ear, A beating heart, my rhythmic drum, The sea is me and I've become.....so touching and impressive. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the member poem of POD.
" A beating heart, my rhythmic drum The sea is me, and I have become." Superb conceptualization. Congrats on poem of the Day. and I have become."
" A beating heart, my rhythmic drum The sea is me, and I have become."
nice poem.i often find myself there sometimes in a different place.
Many of my poem's have the sea as subject material as well. Congratulations on having this poem chosen as poem of the day. James
'I close my eyes and all I hear, Is thunder from my inner ear, A beating heart, my rhythmic drum, The sea is me and I've become. '... is a beautiful stanza. Very nice poem indeed. Congrats.
Is out of reach! ! Only to accept the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!
I close my eyes and all I hear, Is thunder from my inner ear, A beating heart, my rhythmic drum, The sea is me and I've become. - - - - - - -Our feelings are like a vast sea - - Million waves - - that rise and fall.But go deep, you will find a peaceful sea.Congratulations for the beautiful Poem of the Day.
Nice