Wednesday, August 15, 2012

The Sea In Motion Comments

Rating: 5.0

Turbulent moves the water mass
Thumping and roaring as it rolls,
Sheltering in her, myriad queer forms
From tiny planktons to giant killer whales.
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Valsa George
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Akhtar Jawad 16 October 2015

We all are droplets of the great ocean. We cannot be called now ocean. But when we shall be merged in the ocean, we shall again become ocean......................................10

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Ken E Hall 13 June 2015

Gods ocean narrated perfectly its a constant environment of ours that gives us our drinking rain...with our thanks we fill it with plastics and mercury that's in every fish...beaut poem on a beautiful part of our lives thanks and regards

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 March 2014

Marvel of marvels is this ocean, an infinite collection of droplets. Sea is always a wonder. Thank you for bringing this poem to my attention. Please read some of my other recent poems. Best regards.

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Prasanna Kumari 01 September 2012

deep like the ocean itself....reaching a universal dimension with even the minute details also..don't we also carry oceans inside us...hahaha

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Valerie Dohren 24 August 2012

Wonderful poem. - very enjoyable read. The sea is always so enigmatic.

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Elena Sandu 21 August 2012

Wonderful imagery, this poem enriched my soul, thank you!

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Walterrean Salley 19 August 2012

Powerful imagination. This poem as daring as the sea - can feel all the drama. Great imagery. Great job.

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Pankajam K 19 August 2012

sea is indeed a wondeful scene to capture human minds. A never ending inspiration for poets and nature lovers. The images here are engaging. Well written.

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Hans Vr 17 August 2012

As a sea-lover I love this poem very much. It is very well written. I love the images you use. Excellent

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