The Sea-Fever. Comments

I nearly fell into the water, but some kind person stopped just in time, I was so enthusied by the realness of your poem. Bob 10

A wonderful piece Fay, glad I found this one, thank you, regards Tom 10+

HELLO FAY IT'S 1; 15 AM AND I JUST READ YOUR POEM GOOSE BUMPS BEFORE BED LOVE IT LOVE IT! ! ! BUT YOU KNEW I WOULD. ''HER LOVE OF SEA LIFE LONG REMAINS ALLURING A MUMAIDS KISS WOW! ! SEA FEVER IS ADDITIVE WORSE THAN GOLD. TRUE SEA FEVER IS WORSE THAN DRUGS EVEN. I NEVER HAVE DONE DRUGS. BUT AS YOU KNOW I HAVE THAT SEA FEAVER BAD! ! ! ! ! . LOVE THIS POEM MY FRIEND.LOL

Hello Fay, ! ! ! your page is filled with new ones.. So I randomly picked this one, I' m very glad I did.. This is beautiful indeed Fay... You are born with poetry in heart indeed... This is in a way a narrative one isn't it? .. I specially like such ones.. 'But beware, leaving her will drive you wild. Her siren call imprisons with strong hold. Savage jailor she. ' I love these expressions.. very nice to read, very poetic, and beautiful flowery language... with love shan

Of course I like this and I wonder what happened that we both posted sea poems at about the same time. Mine is Drink Seawater? Hxx

Nice work Sea fever was always my favourite poem as a child and you capture it's allure in this fine write xx