The Sea And I Comments
Once I was sand dab small
urchin of the tides
shrieking with the gulls
on my blanket of sand
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Oh my goodness! ! You are so creative, who.who..who the way you wrote who sleeps who watches who dreams, you are the Van Gogh of poetry And the other poems, you really are quite astonishing, I'm going to read more and more, it's really beatiful poetry
I see that you managed to find my pages. You certainly know how to boost my spirits! I later put the title “Owl-Light” to that ‘Who who’ poem, though not to appear in the calligram. The idea with showing ‘who’ in that way was to depict how consciousness drifts in and out as we are falling asleep, until a deeper ‘who’ in sleep takes over. At any rate, I greatly appreciate your explorations of my works and comments!
Oh my goodness! ! You are so creative, who.who..who the way you wrote who sleeps who watches who dreams, you are the Van Gogh of poetry! And the other poems, you really are quite astonishing, I'm going to read more and more, it's really beatiful poetry
I see that you found my pages. You certainly know how to boost my spirits! I later put the title “Owl-Light” to that ‘Who who’ poem, though not to appear in the calligram. The idea with showing ‘who’ in that way was to depict how consciousness drifts in and out as we are falling asleep, until a deeper ‘who’ in sleep takes over. At any rate, I greatly appreciate your explorations of my works and comments!
I tried to look up website with no results, oh well great poetry!
This is just pure awesome the music is so fitting, you are indeed a very complex person of thought, to express such beatiful lines...the shrill of my whistle shivered the still of the serpents lair...your last three questions are a perfect ending, wonderful!
I really do love the musicality of words, their sounds and rhythms. Thank you for reading this and for your constant encouragement. I hope you can find the poem in its intended format as well.
I see that you thought the music was fitting, but I asked them to remove the video, because I felt that it could interfere with the personal internal flow of the poem for readers... Again, thank you!
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7/21/2025 2:32:38 AM # 1.0.0
This poem is beautifully transformative. The sea, and creatures of both water and sand voicing their own pleasant and personal mysteries personified by the imagination of a very gifted writer!