Monday, September 5, 2011

The Sea Comments

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I can see the mystery in your bleu eyes,
I can feel the darkness in your heart,
That deep concrete existence,
When I reveal my heavy secret.
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YOSRA BAIDI
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 September 2020

I feel closer and closer to your arms, When I cry in front of your stormy waves, Weeping, thinking, waiting for daylight. Then everything seems to be a dream, a profound poem. deep thinking. tony

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Shihabudheen K J 28 May 2012

Sea is deep, beyond all over imaginations.a good write, could have included more lines.regards

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 09 January 2012

Lovely thought and beauty in the see.

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Dave Walker 30 September 2011

like it good poem. good write. may i invite you to read my new poem called, running wolf.

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