Monday, April 5, 2010

The Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

I look at you, beautiful, shining with the glaze the sun gave to you
It's as though you are greeting me, so loving, so welcoming
The way you flow, your current, fast as if you're running from something
But yet no one can save you, for they understand not your actions
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Chantal Gumbs
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You have brought the sea to life here Chantal by giving it magnificent moods and movement. Well done my friend.

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Jake Shelvey 10 April 2010

Really beautiful, am so glad I read this poem!

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Chantal Gumbs

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