Sunday, June 7, 2009

The Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

The foaming heads of the great waves-
The sea marching ahead unexhausted
A clean beach
Million pilgrims bathing, taking holy dips in them
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Kelly Jacobson 07 June 2009

This is an awsome poem. Make more like it. Maybe for the earth or something. Keep up the good work! :) 10+

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Kesav Easwaran 07 June 2009

'Armed to the teeth yet zero at the bone'... good expression there...good poem Gargi...mystic images inside...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 07 June 2009

'Armed to the teeth yet zero at the bone And the despair, broken fragments of shells.' A nice poem with beautiful idea.10+

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