The Sea Comments
In successive swells the tide peaks
and then slowly subsides,
only to begin again;
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A wonderful observation of the sea William, I almost felt as if I was paddling in the waves. Particularly liked the lines: 'Only the onlooking moon can pull her back, and this little by little and lap by lap.' Simply beautiful. Kind regards, Justine.
Lovely title. I could almost hear the sounds of the waves. Well done Patricia Gale
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7/28/2025 4:34:04 PM # 1.0.0
This poem has been revised as of 11-19-06. The first stanza is new, and in the first line of the second stanza I substituted the words (ebbs and flows) for the word 'moves'. I also simplified the title, changing it from 'The sea moves with a rhythm all its own' to 'The Sea'. If you happen to read this, let me know if you like the changes, or if I should have left it the way it was.