The Sea Comments

An excellent poem that rhymes so well! 'Seagulls and pelicans drifting by With a few puffy whites in the sky White caps rose and washed over me Come play with me was the sea's plea' - a beautiful stanza. This is one of your best poems I have read so far. The poem goes to 'MyPoemList'.

A nice poem on swimming in a sea. It is really a great experience swimming against the waves, you struggling to move ahead and waves trying to push you back. The fight is exhilarating. Nice poem with a sweet flow. Enjoyed thoroughly. Thanks for sharing.

i wish i were/was one of those white caps! ! ! most favorite lines: Come play with me was the sea's plea As I floated far from the beach What did the peaceful sea teach On this day with no stormy clouds And on the sand lay touristy crowds a wonderful poem and thought of playing back! ! to MyPoemList. continued success for you is my continuing wish, Darla! bri ;)

Swimming in the waves is a great experience! We feel that the sea is responding to our sloshing and swimming! The seagulls and pelicans that fly over are indeed a delightful sight. We never get tired of being rocked by the waves! A sweet poem describing a rollicking experience!