Monday, March 17, 2008

The Screams Comments

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I step outside and feel the rain
It seems it's washing away my pain
I lie in the grass and stare at the sky
The pain floods back, I want to fly
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MCKENZi : ] 17 March 2008

you are so creative and it's pretty obvious you have a good imagination! i love this poem; its always been my dream to fly as well. i envy the birds, haha: ]

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Shaun William Hayes 17 March 2008

good imagery Lacey, keep writing Shaun.

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