Friday, June 5, 2009

The Screams In My Ear Comments

Rating: 5.0

i wake up to the screams in my ear
i want them to leave but they always come nearer
i hate you, your ugly, and stupid they say
they sit there and just claw me away
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margaret atkinson
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William Breland 14 June 2009

I hear them too.. and I could'nt have put it in better words! ! well done sweetie.. keep it up.. : -) i'll definetly be reading 10++++ : -) ~

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Marieta Maglas 07 June 2009

''i scream out in agony but end up falling in defeat for the screams get louder every time i plead'' well written.....10++

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