The Screaming Bitch Comments

ok, i'm (sort of) proud to say........i'm back! BUT this is a tough one to comment on because there is more than English usage to complain..........i MEAN comment on. i just read it again, and i must say there are several places in the poem where the meaning would vary depending on the punctuation AND i think the punctuation is not the way i would arrange it in some places. for example: I wash her, panties in the sink...............this way i interpret the sentence to mean i wash her, and the panties are in the sink (her panties?) but if i move the comma: I wash her panties in the sink....it would mean to me that the speaker is washing her panties and doing it in the sink. i have a time limit for using my mate's computer, more so these days than some times in the past, so i'll come back to this again.........later. bri :)

green is a perfect topic for this one. don't we all agree? again, i'll get back to this one, i think, SOME day. ........................... ;) bri

Nicely and very poetically said