There is factual story that is over fifty years old;
but no poetry has ever been written and none has been told,
about a catastrophic flood that shed tears and even blood.
On the Saturday ending January, in ninteen fifty three.
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Sylvia this is excellent, not only is it informative and factual, but also descriptive in its entirety, you have done justice to what was a truely terrible event in our peace time history.
Yes, nature can change so suddenly, I think that your poem shows respect for those lost to such a tragedy.Love duncan