On a line from Mandelstam - 'I have learned the science of parting'
There was so much we never did together,
places to go and visit hand in hand,
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So sensitively written Paul.........with ease of reading. From the third stanza to the final couplet I melted.....10 love Karin
The cool and theoretical title belies the heartfelt message within this superb poem. Every emotion is touched upon with a subtle grace and honesty. 'regret comes like a band around my heart.' is beautiful. S :)
FULL OF THOUGHTS..........I AM SPEECHLESS THIS TIME, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , KEEP IT UP
Beautifully written... the first poem i read... and it is really beautifull love it :)
OH Paul, your final couplet is so true. Nicely written. Raynette
That is so beautiful, Paul! Very moving and thought provoking, and tender. I love it!