Tuesday, August 22, 2017
'The School Of What's Next' Comments
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Though I don't feel that driven OR misdiagnosed,
Still so many past goals, I find lacking in passion,
Though dragons line up (fancy St. George as toast) ,
When the battle gets done, it seems flame's out of fashion.
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Roof Missing
27 August 2017
Thanks for your comments Bri. Some revisions in fact made! : -)
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7/23/2025 1:48:42 AM # 1.0.0
do you even KNOW that this is Long Tooth 's poem page and you sent me a comment response from Roof Missing, AND...................that if you respond to my comment on this page ONLY, i will rarely see it. i just happened to see it now when i came back to collect the poem for the showcase! ! ! i shall look for revisions and stick it in, so to speak! i like to talk 'dirty'. ha ha. bri ;) ok, i reread it and it is 'good enough'. and offered and 'short', two pluses! ! ! thanks.
Roof Missing is the nickname of Long Tooth my friend as I couldn't choose between the two and so, in fact, you can use either name to find me.