Monday, Monday, Monday!
It marks the beginning of weekdays.
At six thirty in the morning,
the school boy's eyes
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So Fabulously written! .. And So Fabulously expressed! .. Magnificent Endless 10'S And Stars! ..
The humour of a tale well told, in antics a witty ditty, written in catchy rhythm style, brings blessings smiles, to lips eyes of rap readers.
I wrote the poem 'A Humourous Tale Well Told', inspired by the poem 'The School Boy Who Hates Mondays', by the poet Rose Marie Juan-austin and dedicated to Rose Marie Juan-austin.
Marvellous. It's exactly what a school boy does. Monday is a terror and Friday a bliss. It's surreal
Indeed a good fun write on a school boy's behaviour. Liked a lot
An amusing write about a boy who hates Monday as he has to go to school and loves Friday as he has no school tomorrow
This is perfect and relevant piece..... thank u, dear poetess..
Loved the style and narration of the poem. A visual story. Top marks and to my favourite
Just like this young lad, i love Fridays too. Looking forward to a nice week end of fun.
Hello dear Rose, A delightful poem. I identify with it fully. I was just like this. I hated going to school and of all days, Mondays were the worst, the whole week staring at you with boredom.
I much enjoyed this interesting poem, which holds some nostalgia.
p2 happy singing a Friday night freedom song; but the moral is weekdays schooldays wake morning late, fast fly out of bed to an extra energy burst of extra ZZZZZZZZZZZZZs of sleep
p1 waking to the tragedy of school boy weekdays, waking slow reluctant to face school days dragging; stumbling through the week until happy turn time, Friday night from school to home
I wrote the poems 'Weekdays Schooldays Wake Late: From Bed Late Leap' and 'Weekdays Schooldays Wake Late: From Bed Leap', inspired by the poem 'The School Boy Who Hates Mondays' by the poet Rose Marie Juan-austin and dedicated to the poet Rose Marie Juan-austin.
Except for being an hour earlier than it is for me, the first 13 lines sound(s) like most of my mornings now. : ( bri