Sunday, May 11, 2008

The Scent Of His Colone(Next Victim) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pondering of my next victim. Oh the sweet reassuring scent of his colone.
That sweet, sweet smell, linking into his satisfying smile.
His voice. That strong, dearing voice gives me tingles as I listen...Deeply listening.
Never touched by my victim, surely I'd die.
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Javier Garcia 23 April 2009

i like it. i like it a bunch.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 May 2008

you reminds me of black dahlia.well written.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 11 May 2008

love yet seems to be monomaniac taking the spear into the blood................when embarking upon the chilled cry being befuddled........the unique thirst when depicted yet luscious, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Richa Dhodi 11 May 2008

a deadly lover. so who is ur next victim :) nice work... ur poem girbbed me and words bonded me till the end.. ncie work ric.......

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