Monday, April 29, 2013

The Scars Of A Lion Comments

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I got the scars of a lion walking through trial.
No one will ever sleep my dreams.
Not only am I without you–motion the tactics–I am alone in this dream.
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Jacques De Boys
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Chinedu Dike 08 February 2015

A beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated, subtly penned, and nicely encapsulated into a lovely poem. A piece of poetry written in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Noluyolo Mapuma 05 July 2013

Loving this one, great work. I relate to the story though. Thank you

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Gajanan Mishra 29 April 2013

tightest compassion. good poem. thanks.

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