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nicely written poem Melissa

THat is a very deep very compelling work of art. I read it three times, like one walks back for a second look at a painting hoping for a different response, only to get the same response but intensified.

hey very good poem, I can relate to it exactly. Keep on writing

OMG Melissa, so tragically sad. I know all about the pain you talk about Melissa, because I too have had a hard way to go. I know all about the pain that I just want to go away but it just seems to linger and linger. I know about so-called friends who have it made and can't help me because they're afraid someone will see or whisper about them. You have written a very touching, emotional and heartfelt poem Melissa from deep in your heart. Thanx for sharing. Barbara