The Saviour laughed and laughed
Seeing the pastor abandon and resign
His pastoral work before
He died
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Ronald, this poem really grabbed my attention. For me it is the narrative of this that is so good and well laid out. The ommission of pronouns and adjectives here and there, make for a very good approach. The laying out of stanzas is superb, giving a great flow to this.
curious, was it you that was saved recently or someone you know?