Thursday, June 7, 2012
The Savior Comments
Rating: ★3.4
Look, how like a python,
How like a ravenous whale
And how like the Bermuda Triangle
The hungry Fire gapes at us!
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Captain Cur
19 June 2012
I like your style and flow. Strong statement at the end. Very good write.
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7/19/2025 12:30:21 PM # 1.0.0
The raging fire devours nature and everything that gets in it's way, destroys the soul and a loving heart, the saviour is gone. Brilliant imagery and powerful ending! !
Many many thanks to you, dear Hazel for your excellent comment.