Thursday, November 10, 2005

The Savage Silence Of Desire Comments

Rating: 4.8

I lay lust aside and sleep
alone in constellations
of twinkling lullabies,
where the gentle breath
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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Uniqueness of the imagery proves quite sublime. Beautiful

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A marvel! "I… sleep /alone in constellations / of twinkling lullabies"…

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Kelly Allen Vinal 11 November 2005

A great poem and a wonderful title! Wow!

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David Gerardino 10 November 2005

GREAT POEM, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

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***** ********* 10 November 2005

Eila, you describe the volcano of desire very well indeed. One step beyond! springs to mind. 10 from me.

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Charles Chaim Wax 10 November 2005

a lovely poem filled with honest truth devotion exploring complexity a fine poem

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