Saturday, January 5, 2013

The Santa Sans Festive Gears Comments

Rating: 5.0

Flowing white beard, nor happy cheers,
Pot-bellied nor with trademark gears,
Clear of set symbols Santa appears,
No reined-in reindeer his cart steers.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 June 2019

Subtlety in a world of splash, A Santa sans all festive gears/Handing over small ready cash/That earned rare smiles if not loud cheers....endearing expression! Thou I am reading this poem too late but this poem is for all seasons! A sublime piece of work sir.....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 June 2019

After more than five years this poem fetches one feedback and that happens to be yours dear poet. Thanks for the good words, kind rating.

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