The Sands Of Time Comments

From: ****TaMaRa HaNaRinG ****Dusting my page.******.. (DuBaI.... United Arab Emirates; Female; 40) To: Jen Capaldi Date Time: 10/15/2009 8: 28: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: your poem..the sand of time.. this poem was deep and beautiful..presented your feelings in a unique way..excellent write 10+++++ I dream every night And every night my dreams are the same I dream of sand and time

Beautifully done.............

As for me, I like very very long poems that take me for a walk in thought. Well done, Mrs!

He smashed the glass of the Hour brushed the dust from a fine complexion and held out a hand

Good write but I felt it needed to be a bit shorter and have more flow but a 10 for the write

what can i say jen but very beautiful-i see where that poem goes-it something i think we both relate-you're an awesome writer-a gift only few really have-i too dream of sand and time-10+++++++++++++++

slowly consumed by the sands of time.. arent we all? ? very very nice poem..