The Sands Of Time. Comments

The cycle of tear and joy so beautifully captured.Let me quote a few lines- - - But now the time of plenty had left his little world But he knew that it would return again a story to be told

I feel the first verse sets the mood of the poem since it seems to illustrate time moves independently of human needs, and it is up to use our time as well as we can. Good write.

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Very well written and well-sprinkled with lovely descriptives! You are definitely on my to-read list!