' The Sand Palace Comments

Sand Palace is a beautiful poem. Very good.

As I've probably said before Tsira I find your different ways of using the language and your images have a very refreshing effect, help me to see things differently.. this one particularly has that effect... x jim

This is a very poignant and touching poem, Tsira. I love how you've repeated this line- Spread are for me its blue wings- This is strong visually and is the work of a thinking poet, a poet of passion. Splendid poetry.10

Good poem Tsira...beautifully metaphorical...i catch up with the east European breath of the waves that greets the Gothic sand palace...10

I love poems of the sea and yours is no exception. Great write my friend. Best wishes, Andrew

poetry gives us heaven on earth, so readily, oh so easily - for me the sea craves spread for me its blue wings with my frame i feel the waves serene, sublime, pure honeyed words 10+ Mark

love, turn on the light, make my heart bright....beautiful....10

'The sea misses me…it wants to lick My bare skin, like a fish.' a jewel of a thought which reminds me that our desire for God is nothing as compared to God's desire for us

wonderful poem, fine imagery, nice to ponder on

Tsira, I loved this wonderfully written poem, the sea described as blue wings, gorgeous. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. David

dear tsira, i really love these lines of yours. Spread are for me the blue wings, And I hear the waves’ breath.

Waves as wings.. and the reiteration 'spread are for me...' - nicely expressed

as we smooch for years by the spread of blue wings love yet dazzles as rainbow embracing the waves cohered within...............beautiful as luscious grin,10+, thanks for

Gothic in sand in spice upon the weath blue wings in stealth so you fly.