Monday, November 16, 2020

The Sand Castles Are Gone Comments

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Those childish dreams we once had,
Were abandoned on the sandy beach,
Though they arrived in wonder clad,
And they taught the heart to reach!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
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Kostas Lagos 17 November 2020

The sand castles may be gone but the memories remain.Such a beautiful poem!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 19 November 2020

Please accept my sincere thanks.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 November 2020

The melodious life song is very refreshing so also the flight of imagery employed there-in.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 19 November 2020

I am so glad you enjoyed both. Thank you very much.

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 November 2020

Though a yesterday of fervent joy, Once upon an evening has faded away, Bloom scents waft memories we enjoy, As the fantastic scenery of a holiday! /// every beautiful yesterday always will be remembered; excellent poem penned and beautiful rhyming

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 19 November 2020

Thank you so much for taking the time to show your appreciation. It means so much.

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Varsha M 17 November 2020

Yes ma'am a fantastic scene of holiday makes our memories though nature is same it's meaning changes with our mood. Beautiful.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 19 November 2020

Thank you for your perceptive and inspiring remarks.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 November 2020

A fabulous poem with superb reminiscent recollections in poetic imagery presented in a fine rhyming way wow. Kudos. Plz pleez do read my newest poem titled, " Babies cry anywhere "

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 19 November 2020

Thank you for your very kind words of appreciation. I will be delighted to read your poem.

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Chinedu Dike 16 November 2020

Beautiful rendition of words in verse with rhythmic splendour. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 19 November 2020

I shall remain enriched, and I thank you for you spirit lifting words.

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