The Sand Comments

This is really good! Great rythym and so true!

I agree with Catina! It would be a greatsong. Finally not a love poem. I love how true the meaning is :)

Oh, yeah! And I think this should be a song.: ]

'The sand on the beach never looks the same, No matter where you stand something always has to change' Wow. Very nice, Brit, good rhymes. Good perspective.

i like i like makes me think: D

True some do like having a routine but some are also willing to deal with change. A great poem ^^