Friday, April 14, 2006

The Sanctity Of Spring Comments

Rating: 4.5

Static rises up through my body to met you in heaven
Life ignited by a thunder bolt of revitalizing childhood energy.
Awakening from a deep hibernation of despair and obscurity
Purity answered and hope rejuvenated once again.
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Jack Dylan
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Will Barber 15 May 2006

This is fine and powerful song. Your claim to be meticulous is belied by 'thankful the' instead of 'thankful that' - but hey, keyboarding errors are a part of fallible mortalily! I'm joshing you a bit - but I enjoyed the song.

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