Wednesday, June 4, 2008

The Same Rhymes Comments

Rating: 4.9

The rhyme of a friend
Is what you always hum in your heart,
And there will be no when
You and her in a different part.
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Missy Melita
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Gerry Tanamas 15 June 2008

such a pure and beautiful friendship.. I wish I got one kind of friend like you.. another perfection, exellent job mi!

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Marvin Brato 06 June 2008

You are talented... keep it up! High marks.

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Catherine Rica Cosico 05 June 2008

same rhymes... a friends love looking through from a distance a love that is pure and divine

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Hockey Fan 05 June 2008

What an ending! Very well written. 'When we realize our skin has rotten to death, You are going to find that I'm still in your path.'

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