Tuesday, December 4, 2018

The Same Old Story Repeated In 2018 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time is no lesser dramatist than Shakespeare
The drama it staged on the New Year Day
Started with wild dances and mild drinks
Blue Eyes met to reflect a bluish ray.
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Mahtab Bangalee 13 December 2018

starting of this poem quite wonderful/ like it

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 December 2018

FANTASTIC! A very encompassing write of the same winds of time. Liked the title and the final stanza brings out the joy, love and spirit of Christmas. Wonderfully crafted and executed.

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Khalid Saifullah 05 December 2018

Story of a parting year is kissed by the poet so warmly.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 December 2018

Sir Jawad ji you leave nothing for any one to guess JAN TO DECEMBER COME now lets enjoy Xmass round the corner Hurray have champagne who knows what tomorrow will bring a same NEW Year each year some may be others may not be.So cheers sir enjoy today Xmas is only weeks away let's swing and sway and enjoy our life's ways Merry Xmas from poet me PLUME

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2018

What a fantastic expression you have made dear Jawadji. So brilliant poem. I wish to visit this poem over and over again. The beginning stanza is begun with a dramatic style. The second stanza goes on playing. The last stanza provides much love and happiness. Thank you a lot.

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Bharati Nayak 05 December 2018

An awesome write about the months and seasons of life- - - Time is no lesser dramatist than Shakespeare The drama it staged on the New Year Day Started with wild dances and mild drinks Blue Eyes met to reflect a bluish ray. January was passed in exchanging the bouquets Life in February was passed in the parks with flowers March added perfumes to alcohol of passions April invited the couple at the lonely bowers.

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