Tuesday, February 11, 2014

The Same Old Flame Comments

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An old flame, once hot and affirm,
Spreading the gentle galore of fortune,
One possesses abundant, not known,
Tips of the fingers and the toes are just a form,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 February 2014

ahh....the desire to glow bright! inked it so well poet.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 February 2014

Maybe the flame is always young, it is the torch that gets old. Flame keeps burning without blowing off. Beautifully presented in the poem. Thank you.

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Noreen Carden 12 February 2014

Hello Veeraiyah I like this flame very much. Flames aglow, where the minds have thought alike. I love that line Well done

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Gajanan Mishra 11 February 2014

desire to glow bright, good writing, thanks.

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