The Same Moon Comments

bueno. this is very well written.

I like how u used the words it's very discriptive I love watching the moon...

Excellent writing and very descriptive, truly gifted. Keep writing! ! Phebe

Truly a masterpiece. Your writing shows maturity. I like this poem.

I'm delighted to read all your poetry and will. Nice work can't hardly believe your only 15. Your ahead of yourself in writing, a real talent.

You said that the moon was the poetry that moved the sea. Your poetry is the song that moves the heart. Very beautiful.

This is very nice, I especially like the last four stanza's, keep up the good work!

Very nice. I like the whole poem, but that last couplet could stand as a poem on it's own. Lovely verse.

wonderful job! ! keep up the good work.

'Together, separate, single apart They have but a single heart A beautiful climax! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +10 to you lil fren regards anju