As I stare at the moon above
Can't help but to feel sad
That I am admiring it alone
Admiring the beautiful moon.
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I think lovers all over the world do this. Look at the moon or a bright, distant star and think of their loved ones. If the separation is for long, they long for their quick return. They spread the glowing moonlight on their bodies and feel a warm embrace of their beloved. Wonderful! 10/10.
Romantic, deep and touching verses. I'll always be a moon admirer..Cristina Teodor
Parapsychology with the moon.Sometimes i wish it happens what yu wish.If it does not though people will call you a lunatic, i will still call you a poet
Universal objects always give solace. Great philosophy of life is reflecting in these humble lines. Nice work.
This poem really touches, very moving. The love for the moon and the warm feeling you get by the fact that he is looking at the same moon, followed by this very nice forward looking message. Fantastic. It makes the reader feel good. That is a great, great achievement of a poet. Well done.
you have a very unique way at looking at things...which results in amazing poetry!
I really like this one very much, sad but hopeful...is the hearts pang speaking Thank you
Lovely hope and lovely wish. Deep faith in your heart makes this poem so calm and beautiful. Well done.
..as the white moon... the poem too illuminates itself with the feeling of solace and longing.. nice poem..
Awwwww.... Really sweet poem Naida. It is really cute.9/10
Very nicely written, short but you tell it all. It's so strange how we can find solace in the moon. Such a comforting effect. I love how even you are seperated you can look at the same moon and have that great bond. Nicely put.
Thats when you are looking at a blue moon until he returns..nice one..regards
I n’ he sharing same Moon but different result soft poem… thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Naida Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
and he will be home soon.. full of the feeling of waiting in love. who is this lucky man..? thank you for sharing your inner feelings