Thursday, June 20, 2019

The Same Indian Heart Comments

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If Indian I'm, I scarce have had a choice,
Yet having been one, sure adds to my joys,
Had Providence asked, I might have opted
For a more affluent land, less crowded,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Edward Kofi Louis 20 June 2019

Home sweet Home. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 June 2019

Yes, home sweet home. Let the visible grandeur of Rome remain with Rome, For me in my sweet home endure. Thank you Edward Louis for visiting this poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 June 2019

A vivid picture of Indian hearts has been portrayed incisively by you dear sir. Inspite of quarrelling and cantankerous attitude people of India feel deep sense of brotherhood here. I mark two lines much impressive and these are.... This is where I was born, here I belong, Here I intend to die singing my song. A brilliant poem is so amazingly shared. A 10

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 June 2019

I must indeed thank you and other three poets to read this rather longish poem and giving your learned views. You are right, I feel that love for the country is like love for your love interest- it is despite, rather than due to.

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M Asim Nehal 20 June 2019

A fantastic poem! ! The very nature of Indians nicely put together.

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 June 2019

Hello Mohammad Nehal, glad to meet you through your feedback. Thanks for nice words.

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Savita Tyagi 20 June 2019

Beautiful reflections Pathak Ji. Home is where heart is and love for homeland is tied to all the veins of a heart.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 June 2019

I am glad, Savitaji, you agree and like the head and heart expressed in the poem. Thanks for visiting the poem.

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