The Same.... Comments

That very first line, 'seeming to be the same' catches the tone of the whole work... the sense of a plodding on mundanity. Not your usual style P, and you sure can turn your pen to it. Grand; impacting - a very far from 'same-ish' piece. t x

A mood piece indeed Patricia. Neatly done.

Some rather nicly worded lines, enjoy.....

a very beautiful penned piece of wonderful poetry.