Thursday, August 4, 2016

The Sailor Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

He was young at start
but he sailed careful and clever
and his sailing was likely
to the old sailor man.
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Lotlot Diaz
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Siddartha Montik 18 December 2016

For i have shed my life not once not twice not trice. Beautiful peace of expression! loved reading it.. every line! ! ! thank you Poet! ! full vote! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 August 2016

Expression of sadness through humor is amazingly done. Sailor man is very wonderful example in this poem definitely. Young sailor also can reach the destination. Very amazing presentation makes this interesting...10

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Asia Villaflor 06 August 2016

thank you sir...god bless you and your family.

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