Friday, June 5, 2015

The Sail Comments

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They have been away from me
Early at a sleepy summer dawn
No longer saying 'good morning'
I stand on earth before sunrise
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Cigeng Zhang
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Christopher Tye 22 July 2016

Wonderful poem, really enjoyed reading it. We are but just children sailing through the universe and life at the mercy of the winds of time.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 April 2016

On a devious sail. With the ways of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 June 2015

This is beautiful poetry with a nice flow and concept.Eyes blurred, all in trance.....'is very nice.Keep inking.

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