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Blood on the street;
The man who cast the first stone
was discharged and acquainted
While passersby were jailed
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Matthias Pantaleon
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Tom Billsborough 07 June 2016

It's a fine poem, Matthias. Just a couple of points. In the third line you use the word acquainted. Should It not be acquitted? In the third stanza pardon should be pardoned. Otherwise really good with a powerful theme well presented. Tom Billsborough

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Matthias Pantaleon

Matthias Pantaleon

Oronija Island, Nigeria
Matthias Pantaleon
Matthias Pantaleon
Oronija Island, Nigeria
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