It's a fine poem, Matthias. Just a couple of points.
In the third line you use the word acquainted. Should It not be acquitted?
In the third stanza pardon should be pardoned.
Otherwise really good with a powerful theme well presented.
Tom Billsborough
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It's a fine poem, Matthias. Just a couple of points. In the third line you use the word acquainted. Should It not be acquitted? In the third stanza pardon should be pardoned. Otherwise really good with a powerful theme well presented. Tom Billsborough