The Saddest Line's I Write At Night Comments

line 5: " ..And when it by it comes " ? ? this i like (and some other lines) : " And after, frost comes snow it dances, as it melts" I've shared this with my wife. both of us think parts (many parts perhaps) sound 'nice', but there is disjointedness and maybe some symbolism we do not understand. And she thinks you could use some more lines to make the current lines more understandable. bri :)

Feeling falling petals from the blue of sky when the sweet springs die and the offsprings cry. Is IT love? you and.........your poem inspired me, dear friend.

A wonderful poem! Beautifully composed......10/10