Friday, February 28, 2020

The Sad Elderly Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw this elderly man cross the street
A few kids were calling him old man
His face so sad as he walked along
Why don't these kids understand
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Suelynn Walters
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KL Jayatissa K Liyanage 28 February 2020

A poem of humane touch. Especially parents should see to it that their children never ever in life bully a weak person. Be it a man or woman, or a kid, never mind children should never do that. They should be taught that they too one day can become one. Thanks very much for the touching poem. x

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Soran M. H 28 February 2020

Amazing poem..with very strong theme..it deserves 10 thanks for sharing

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Shaun Cronick 28 February 2020

Superb poem so well written, ending with a heart- felt moral message. Thank you good lady for writing and sharing this soul- searching gem. 10++ and added to my treasure chest. And may God Bless and Keep you.

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