The Sabre Comments

Gasp! You had my heart going a million miles an hour. Brilliant write. Now tell me, how am I going to get to sleep tonight] A thousand stars

wonderful imagery Bravo! ! ! !

Thank You, Poet Mr Nair. A true depiction, to the last syllable

A horrible nightmare depicted rousing fear

Thank You, Rose Marie for reading the poem and sharing your thoughts..

Beautiful depiction of a nightmare! Magnificent poetic expressions with great images.

Better it is to by drenched in sweat than in blood...MAYBE. I think you left 'r' out of 'Though'. ;) bri

What do you mean by 'warp'? The heart sobs? What 'opens the mouth'? The heart?