Tuesday, October 4, 2016

The Rusty Wig Comments

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The Rusty Wig

I came across a rusty wig
full of lice and mice
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Annette Aitken
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Christopher Tye 12 October 2016

Great poem, really amusing work. Rusty wig is that classed as a redhead?

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Annette Aitken 12 October 2016

Ha ha ha Christopher to funny but no it has nothing to do with red heads

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Tom Billsborough 05 October 2016

Well, if it makes us write as well as this, I wouldn't mind renting it for a while. Despite rumours to the contrary, I have a little head, so it might fit! The descriptions are gloriously funny. Love the hippo with its trolly! Tom.

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Annette Aitken 08 October 2016

One size fits all Tom.....imagination was running wild lol..Thanks Tom

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Barry Middleton 04 October 2016

Imagination is a wonderful thing. Especially love the third verse.

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Annette Aitken 04 October 2016

Thats so kind of you to say Barry..and for taken the time out to read and comment....

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 October 2016

Beautiful! ! With your imaginations. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Annette Aitken 04 October 2016

Edward thanks you for always reading and commenting

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 October 2016

What a beautiful drop! ! Wish i could don the rusty wig for once to have a visit to wonderland. Beautifully written it flows so nice. Keep dropping such nice poem.

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Annette Aitken 04 October 2016

Thank you Anil I think we all wish we could even just for a day....Thank you my friend

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