Oh the cold air of the Kishorn burial ground,
and the ghost's there everywhere you turn,
the cold and the damp seems to follow you down,
to the brackish waters of the Russell Burn.
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Very nice. I would only make one change. Take out the apostrophe in line two; it doesn't belong in the word GHOSTS. Or on second thought, maybe it does. If you meant more than one ghost, then it doesn't. But if you meant the GHOST (singular) IS THERE, then it does belong! Well written, lad!
I'd be pleased to write just one poem as good as this Perfection Thanks for sharing Have a Happy New Year: O)
Lang may yer lum reek Luscious Larry' (long may your chimney smoke)
Excellent poem! ! Well deserved! !