Monday, December 8, 2014

The Russell Burn Comments

Rating: 2.5

Oh the cold air of the Kishorn burial ground,
and the ghost's there everywhere you turn,
the cold and the damp seems to follow you down,
to the brackish waters of the Russell Burn.
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Peter Strugnell
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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 10 March 2015

Excellent poem! ! Well deserved! !

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Kim Barney 10 March 2015

Very nice. I would only make one change. Take out the apostrophe in line two; it doesn't belong in the word GHOSTS. Or on second thought, maybe it does. If you meant more than one ghost, then it doesn't. But if you meant the GHOST (singular) IS THERE, then it does belong! Well written, lad!

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Francie Lynch 10 March 2015

A superior poem. Well-done. Nice to read a really good Daily.

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Paul Brookes 29 December 2012

I'd be pleased to write just one poem as good as this Perfection Thanks for sharing Have a Happy New Year: O)

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Peter Strugnell 29 December 2012

Lang may yer lum reek Luscious Larry' (long may your chimney smoke)

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Luscious Larry 28 December 2012

Fantastic poem. A wee bit o' perfection Lad!

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Peter Strugnell

Peter Strugnell

Portsmouth, UK
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