Saturday, August 16, 2014

The Rushing Winds Comments

Rating: 5.0

The winds
rushing winds
and the birds I saw
flying above the shore
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Jesus Diaz Llorico
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Agatha Eliza 22 October 2015

Captivating poem..I can almost feel the cooling wind, and visualize the birds in their flight above the shore..No path is seen, just a shadow.10 +++

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