Wednesday, July 9, 2014

The Rush Of Life Comments

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It's our life, the god had hive,
but here we have created the rush of life.
now, life is all about the lifeless prank,
and the truth of life had far away sank.
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tanya gupta
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Donnie Wolff 23 August 2014

This is a great poem Tanya

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Colleen Courtney 09 July 2014

A great poem filled with valuable truths and in which the last line says it all! Very well done! Kudos!

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Geetha Jayakumar 09 July 2014

Beautiful poem Tanya. Very true said regarding life. Today we are forgetting to live for self, how much do we give to ourselves, just always in a rush we are. How much do we enjoy? We should keep away from hatred and life is what we make....very true said in each lines. I loved reading it.

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