Wednesday, May 20, 2009

The Rush Comments

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Toni Bellanger
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Kushal Vaishnani 06 June 2009

Splendid poem... straightforward depiction by using most essential of words.. 10 ++++ Regards Kushal

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Brishti Mazumdar 03 June 2009

Nothing, but the rush of you taking any pleasure in me. Hummm...Very straight...I liked your approach...Brishti Mazumdar

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Karamia Smith 01 June 2009

that was a powerful emotinal poem. i loved it!

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Jazz Annis 31 May 2009

very nice...liked it...

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Muhammad Ali 28 May 2009

nice poem...10

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Shashendra Amalshan 27 May 2009

ohhhh, wish i had some one like her..i miss my ex soo much..nice one10++

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Bonnie Collins 27 May 2009

You capture your burning desire very vividly here, and may I say, there is nothing in the world like falling in love, and to have the passion at its platu at the same time....No matter what life lies in store for you, you will never forget the intencedy of the passion you are feeling this particular moment.......... Very short, but oh so powerfulll........

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you may find no ne around and won't like evern. the desire is intense and youmay have it

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Toni Bellanger

Toni Bellanger

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