Nothing, but the rush of you taking any pleasure in me. Hummm...Very straight...I liked your approach...Brishti Mazumdar
ohhhh, wish i had some one like her..i miss my ex soo much..nice one10++
You capture your burning desire very vividly here, and may I say, there is nothing in the world like falling in love, and to have the passion at its platu at the same time....No matter what life lies in store for you, you will never forget the intencedy of the passion you are feeling this particular moment.......... Very short, but oh so powerfulll........
you may find no ne around and won't like evern. the desire is intense and youmay have it
Splendid poem... straightforward depiction by using most essential of words.. 10 ++++ Regards Kushal