The Royal, The Regal Versus The Poet's Realm Comments

Outstanding well done

i enjoyed this quite a bit as i had my slave girl read it to me, the master, seated on my platinum throne. bravo.

The poem as well as all the comments on it are all interesting...you write with a proper outlining...good Zaynub....

fine.novel and well written

So true what are all the material treasures in the world versus the soul treasures of the poet. Unless of course the king is a poet himself.

interesting and fun too....liked reading it..... and i loved the way you thumbed yer poetic nose at pomp and glory great...

Great imagery with a lovely flow, you write beautifully!

i like the rythm in this one and as always you have a talent with words and you're not afraid to show it! ! xXx Zarina

A really fantastic poem, really like it.

nice written and in a very meaningful sense.

i really enjoyed this, it felt like the ride at a fairground where you raise and fall without actually walking anywhere...and yes i make you right, what a difficult time the sovereigns have placed in a position with such high expectations, always appears lovely on first inspection but oh my god how boring and so so restrictive....so much better to be the one to entertain and hopefully as you say sway thoughts occasionally....

Long description of wayward riches and pomp decimated by loving voice ans songs. True. It's always that way. Keep it up.