The Rosy Lay Comments

Touch of rose! ! With the muse of love. Nice work.

Hello poet friend Yash. A very well written piece, I enjoyed, Loyd PS: Please check out my new book on Amazon or Barnes and Noble, Pumpkinny Tales. Thanks for your support.

Great imagery.......fantastic love piece.......Yash...........like greater love hath no man than this, that he waited and waited till love vanished.........the nearest dream recedes unrealized...................

A beautiful poem narrating a tragic love story.

Good morning Yash. Thank you for your recent review of my work. Tis is another very romantic poem, well done, Loyd

This is a really good poem I like how you use a range of emotions

The Conceptualization of the abstract feeling has blossomed well in your poem. Your poems have always been a classical mix of emotions and rhythm. Keep it up: and surely do invite to read your poems. They make us fresh

intriguing poem...beautifully written

Fantastic Job! You write good poems. It's amazing.

your notes guide the reader and help him contextualize the narrative, or description too...but i think your words carry much strength to render their meaning in all abstraction...one can imagine the moment of poetic conception!

Don't worry, Yash...life has its cycles...ups, downs, joys, sorrows, flowers, thorns...take it in your stride...all that happens happens for the best...one love story ends, only to be replaced by a much better one, more poignant than the last...

Fantastic write from your pen. You have described each lines beautifully. I loved reading each lines...

enjoyed! liked! ...........................emotions gushing forth from inside the heaps of images............

bellissimo....this poem is written from the depth part of your heart as these perfect lines are showing the fact. P.S, i love the story behind this lovely work. it shows that you have a real good talent to write. keep up the way.

nice visual..like it

You have such a descriptive way for writing verse. Great work and great imagery, thank you.

I love the way you pick the scene and romantic spring season as the highlight, it really beautifully written _Soul

Expression of love in a flowery bloom. Detailing each thought with words of passion and ecstasy. Young and gifted you are. Flows beautifully.

The unrequited love is never forgotten unless it becomes a love worshipped and set on pedastal...wonderful poem but it makes me sad that she didn't love him enough back..or did she? Good poem.

The unrequited love is never forgotten unless it becomes a love worshipped and set on pedastal...wonderful poem but it makes me sad that she didn't love him enough back..or did she? Good poem.