The Rosebud Opens [ Tanka ] Poem by Nudershada Cabanes

The Rosebud Opens [ Tanka ]

Rating: 5.0


The rosebud opens
To see the breaking of dawn
To kiss the dewdrop
Before it dries in the sun
And fades with the morning mist

Sunday, April 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: morning,rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 April 2018

An excellent nature write in its brevity.Beautifully crafted and executed.10

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Sandra Feldman 02 April 2018

Pictorially and Poetically, Perfect! Bravo!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 April 2018

Nudershada, such a wonderful tanka....10++++

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